final project reflection

Thus far I would say that my progress with my final speech, the This I Believe speech is going very well.  I was able to think of my topic of what I wanted to write about very easily.  Being able to present my first draft was very helpful.  I received a lot of good feedback from my classmates.  Also you helped a lot with the beginning of my speech saying what to change to make it sound different that the other students who like to talk about the same topic.  Changing the beginning helped me change things in the rest of the speech so it was not repetitive and sounded like an original speech.  I feel that I have improved a lot of areas of the speech since the first draft.  It is a lot different than the first draft going in more depth of how I had to work for a lot of things in my life and how everything was not granted to me.  At this point with the speech I feel that I am pretty much complete with it.  I feel that I fix the things that I needed to, to make it a all around better speech.