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Hello America, I would like to address our nation today about the issues in this world that I am going to resolve when I am elected into office.  I believe that what I have to offer to this country with my business and government experience is one that no other can offer.  Out of college double majoring in political science and economics I landed myself a job on Wall Street.  Here I would only spend a few years because of the great interest that I had in our government.  I would work in the city government of Boston until I was appointed mayor.  This brings me to now.  In front of thousands of people discussing why I am the best candidate for the next president of the great country, the United States of America.

I want to discuss three major points that in my eyes this country needs to fix.  First our economy, second the war on terrorism and lastly the war on drugs.  To fix our economy I will use my knowledge from school.  I have also put a team together that is analyzing what is wrong with our economy and how we can fix this.  This isn’t going to favor a certain group of people; this is going to help everyone.  For the fight against terror I have already put a team together of people in our government that know a lot on the topic.  We are going to take the aggressive approach and weaken them till they are no longer a threat against us.  For the last topic, the war on drugs.  We are going to strengthen our boarders and crack down on the flow of drugs into the U.S.

So please America, vote for me I can assure you a better way of living.